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EndlessMidnight
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 11:29 pm Reply with quote

Dare To Dive

Perfect world
Starts with you
The courage needed
To take that leap of faith

Hold your breath,
Jump, and pray
That someone
Is there to catch you

But if not
Just remember
That perhaps
You weren't meant to be caught

Instead you need to look up
Arms wide open
And hope
You have the strength
To catch the one
Plummeting towards you
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 9:30 am Reply with quote

Aww, I liked this. It has a nice message.

I liked the last stanza the best. It makes a good point. That you can't always think about why you weren't helped...you have to help others instead.



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