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Joined: 10 Sep 2006
Posts: 213
Location: Texas!
Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 2:20 am
You shine like the brightest star,
When you laugh the way you do,
I wait to hear "I love you",
And when you speak I can't even breathe,
Do you know just what you do to me?
Don't leave me to go so far,
It will break my heart to see you get in your car,
Don’t forget about me when you meet someone new,
Always remember I love you too.
I want you to stay with me,
So we can always be,
Together...forever... wearing our hearts on our sleeves,
Baby just you and me.
When you start to like another girl,
Think of me a mile down the road,
As a child chasing frogs and squirrels,
Kissing on the playground 'cause we were bored.
I've never been good with good-byes,
But I know if anything you'll shine,
In college and fly high,
Knowing this I think I'll be fine.
And I know I'll have to believe,
That we'll come back to be,
Together...forever...wearing our hearts on our sleeves,
Baby just you and me. _________________ It's to late for you and your white horse to come around. -Taylor Swift
Band Geek Co-Editor-in-Chief
Joined: 04 Jan 2007
Posts: 756
Location: The Music Room
Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 9:33 am
Very cute Is somebody in lurve? *nudge, nudge* Haha.
I liked this very much...one thing though,
Quote:
Don't leave me to go so far,
It will break my heart to see you get in your car,
For some reason this line really bothered me...it doesn't fit with the rest of it.
Otherwise, perfect! _________________ "I like baseball, movies, good clothes, fast cars and you. What else do ya need to know?" -John Dillinger
OEHFICE Editor-in-Chief
Joined: 09 Sep 2006
Posts: 1169
Location: Soccerland
Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 4:25 pm
Aw, I also like this very much.
Again, your poems are so cool!
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Is somebody in lurve? *nudge, nudge* Haha.
