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<3Kat<3 Editor
Joined: 10 Sep 2006
Posts: 213
Location: Texas!
Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 11:43 pm
I don't want to be here,
Not even over there,
The lights are bright,
I want to fight,
I don't want to be here.
The girls are laughing,
The boys are clapping,
The voices are loud,
The music is hazy like a cloud,
I don't want to be here.
Spinning around and sliding
On stage instead of gliding,
My foot getting stepped on,
Not my idea of fun,
I don't want to be here.
Strange moves I can't remember,
I'm not from a ballet in Denver,
To much dancing,
I'm not use to prancing,
I don't want to be here.
I'd rather be anywhere,
Other then being here,
It's like my worst nightmare,
I know I'm being unfair,
But I don't want to be here. _________________ It's to late for you and your white horse to come around. -Taylor Swift
Band Geek Co-Editor-in-Chief
Joined: 04 Jan 2007
Posts: 756
Location: The Music Room
Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 9:35 am
*Sigh* I can relate.
This was cool, I liked it because it shares a kind of common feeling. Everyone has that thing or place that they hate doing or being at.
Nice! _________________ "I like baseball, movies, good clothes, fast cars and you. What else do ya need to know?" -John Dillinger
OEHFICE Editor-in-Chief
Joined: 09 Sep 2006
Posts: 1169
Location: Soccerland
Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 4:21 pm
Your poems are so cool!
Hmm..I see it as not wanting to being at a dance..maybe.
But I loved the rhyme sequence and how each stanze ends with "I don't want to be here" to stress the point. Nice!
_________________ "Whoever pursues righteousness and love finds life, prosperity and honor." - Proverbs 21:21
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