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EndlessMidnight Writer in Training
Joined: 08 Nov 2008
Posts: 16
Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 10:00 am
Let Go
There will come a time
Where letting go is the only option
Leaving control in the hands
Of a mere concept
By allowing for an opportunity
Where hopes and dreams become reality
Once cynical thoughts are replaced
With a love so true; a bond so strong
That nothing may break it
The possibility of a happier tomorrow
Now tangible
And the once desired comfort is found
In the arms of another _________________ Gra, Dilseacht, Cairdeas.
~EndlessMidnight~
poggles The Sparkle Princess
Joined: 03 Oct 2006
Posts: 1361
Location: Australia
Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 9:16 pm
I like this one, but I don't really connect the ideas in the first stanza with the last two stanzas...I think that's just me though.
I especially like how the first stanza is written, it's like someone grasping for the last hope. _________________ "It's waiting for me... Here I am!"
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OEHFICE Editor-in-Chief
Joined: 09 Sep 2006
Posts: 1169
Location: Soccerland
Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:16 pm
I love the meaning behind it. I think it's all about letting go and moving on cause eventually it just has to happen. So I'm guessing it's more relationship related? But it's still comforting to read.
Nice!
_________________ "Whoever pursues righteousness and love finds life, prosperity and honor." - Proverbs 21:21
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