EndlessMidnight
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My FortressMy Fortress
Hot tears sting the eyes of the broken
While the haunted heart
Graces the souls of those
Mangled by life's battles
Self-preservation keeps me safe
From the cold world
In which I so reluctantly walk through
Wondering when the strong fortress
I have built will be knocked down
By someone
Who will so easily rescue me
From the tainted thoughts
That have long been
My sole companion
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poggles
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It sounds lonely,
my only issue is this line:
| Quote: | | In which I so reluctantly walk through |
I think it should read either "Which I so reluctantly walk through" or "In which I so reluctantly walk".
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