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EndlessMidnight
Writer in Training
Joined: 08 Nov 2008
Posts: 16
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 Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 10:00 am |
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Let Go
There will come a time
Where letting go is the only option
Leaving control in the hands
Of a mere concept
By allowing for an opportunity
Where hopes and dreams become reality
Once cynical thoughts are replaced
With a love so true; a bond so strong
That nothing may break it
The possibility of a happier tomorrow
Now tangible
And the once desired comfort is found
In the arms of another
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poggles
The Sparkle Princess
Joined: 03 Oct 2006
Posts: 1361
Location: Australia |
| Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 9:16 pm |
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I like this one, but I don't really connect the ideas in the first stanza with the last two stanzas...I think that's just me though.
I especially like how the first stanza is written, it's like someone grasping for the last hope.
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OEHFICE
Editor-in-Chief
Joined: 09 Sep 2006
Posts: 1169
Location: Soccerland |
| Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:16 pm |
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I love the meaning behind it. I think it's all about letting go and moving on cause eventually it just has to happen. So I'm guessing it's more relationship related? But it's still comforting to read.
Nice!
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