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EndlessMidnight
Writer in Training
Joined: 08 Nov 2008
Posts: 16
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 Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:22 pm |
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Sorrow’s Song
Here it comes again
Rising from within
I try so hard to hold it in
But it’s no use
Tears flood my eyes like a river
And the sorrow pierces through me
Scared and alone
Left to deal with it on my own
Never admitting my role
In this destruction
So blinded by stubborn ways
Denying involvement
Never once did I see
The hurt I caused
Trying to find myself
Led to losing you
Left to regret
The path I chose to walk
Alone
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Gra, Dilseacht, Cairdeas.
~EndlessMidnight~ |
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poggles
The Sparkle Princess
Joined: 03 Oct 2006
Posts: 1361
Location: Australia |
| Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 5:12 pm |
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awww
sounds sad 
I really like this stanza:
| Quote: | Scared and alone
Left to deal with it on my own
Never admitting my role
In this destruction |
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"It's waiting for me... Here I am!"
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Blind Crow
Co-Editor-in-Chief
Joined: 10 Sep 2006
Posts: 794
Location: WV |
| Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 7:48 pm |
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This poem has been voted the best for the month of March!
CONGRATULATIONS! This poem really deserves it!
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I'll walk hand and hand with my faith, step for step with my beliefs, and never fear the path unknown. |
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poggles
The Sparkle Princess
Joined: 03 Oct 2006
Posts: 1361
Location: Australia |
| Posted: Sat May 30, 2009 9:00 pm |
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Congratulations 
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"It's waiting for me... Here I am!"
I bet you can't beat my brute |
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